Today is October's Heart-Bits with Magaly, 2017 and I'm bringing just a few words to the party. I hope you enjoy them and that you have a look around all the others joining in the fun.
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Love is
Sighs on the wind
Feathers on skin
Stars rending
Hearts mending
Words like stone
Hitting to the bone
Love is
Fists hitting
Slaps missing
Tears streaming
Fears screaming
Words like stone
Hitting to the bone
Love is
Candles in flame
Voices with no shame
Herbs scattered round
Power flowing from the ground
Words like stone
Hitting to the bone
Love is
Light and fire
Death and desire
Wanting and hating
Killing and mating
Words like stone
Hitting to the bone
Love is
Soaring to the sky
Falling from so high
Crashing to the ground
Our souls scattering round
Words like stone
Hitting to the bone
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Thanks to Magaly for hosting another wonderful gathering.
thanks for stopping by!
love & blessings
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15 comments:
ooooow.....shuddering with goosebumps from reading and feeling the passion in your words XXX
This is gorgeously penned! ❤️ Especially love the last stanza! ❤️
Powerful words that gut punch someone who has......loved. Wonderful, xoxo Oma Linda
definitely many types of love there. Awesome write!
I'm squealing in celebration of what your poem shows without saying the words: Love is everything... and words. Delicious. And very true.
Thanks for bringing your love (light and dark) and stones to my October's Heart-Bits.
The use of repetition in this really drives home the universality of love, even as it takes so many wildly different forms.
Hi Laura, this is so beautiful...feathers on skin( love that!!). This poem has so many different energies..serene and wild and powerful..full of motion/movement..it feels like a song!
Gorgeous words and imagery and emotions!
awesome!!
Victoria
Oh, so haunting... Beautiful!
Very powerful and beautiful Laura!! Big Hugs!
Hi just come across from Stacey's blog 'Magic Love Crow'
Enjoyed your poem, thank you.
All the best Jan
Love is...
A punching, piercing and powerful piece of writing. The contrast, opposing forces, coming together to form a whole is masterly. Rhythm...a rendering.
Thank you Laura for participating in Magaly's blog party, and the privilege of your beautiful writing.
"Words like stone
Hitting to the bone"
Truth! Wonderful piece!!
What a beautiful way to show that love is everything.
A beautiful, moving piece!
An awesome spell, wound right and tight, to make us think of all the things love is, and is not, for, and all the ways we need and want it, sometimes despite our best interests. Loved it.
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